The instrumental section in the middle was beautiful. Kind of like Doumaaa said, something to make the vocals stand out a little more is the only tweak that I would even suggest. The vocals have an uncommon quality to them; I’m not sure how to describe it but it works.
The lyrics remind me of all the times I’ve stared at a small block of text and felt validated and appreciated by a person who sees me as a block of text. They remind me of the times I’ve stared at a block of text written three weeks ago, and wished I could reach through time and space to help the person who wrote it.
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